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Shout out to the fics you read years and years ago, fics you found on a whim late at night and read and moved on and yet their stories haunt. Pour one out for those fics you stand no chance in hell of finding again and yet even long after you read those words, you still find yourself affected by them. Here’s to the stories that exist without name, author or even words but just the gentle impression they left on you long ago.
#I read so much DP fic back in the day on FF that I'll never see again#I still remember one of the first I read where Danny had his accident became Phantom in front of sam and tuck#and then then fled hid from everyone for years and was in college when he hears of trouble in amity and returns#i read that like 18 years ago like just a random ass fic I read at 2am and yet#I think about it sometimes out of the blue how it made ME feel as a young 13 year old about the idea of abandoning everything to run#idk if the author cares about this story#if anyone else remembers it#it passed in and out of my life in less than a hour and yet a full childhood lifespan later I am making a tumblr post about it#there's something a little bit magical about that I think
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Two weeks after anime Nanami's death and there are still ppl bitching about how sick Gege is to k*ll off his favorite character brutally like that. I started to think those ppl conveniently skipped the fact that Gege had canonically wrote Nanami as the most gentleman and (not) arguably had the best personality among JJK's adults that made his character so loved by many. That the way his death was narrated is without question better than other deaths in the story. As we saw him gave his best to protect others and being worn down first then his last moments with Yuuji and Haibara. That it was clearly shown how impactful his death was for Yuuji. That all of those narratives combined made Nanami such an unforgettable supporting character. Which spoke a lot about how Gege treated Nanami as a character and it's definitely not a bad writing or doing him ugly.
#i know GG said he didnt intend to k*ll him at first and that he was k*lled off cz his power and role cud not progress further than shibuya#then if he decided to make Nanamin left with such impact rather than his role being overshadowed by other new stronger characters so what#the author saw it from wider scopes how a supporting chara fills their roles to support the protags etc while readers will usually just car#abt their supporting role for the protag how they fulfill their role for the story etc while readers will prolly have one bias or two and#cudnt care less about the other characters#like idk why they keep comparing jjk to other big names shounen and wrote it off as gege's ugly writing when gg always said jjk won't be#like other shounen?#my thoughts#jujutsu kaisen#nanami kento#nanamin#kento nanami#jjk#nanami kento x reader#nanami kento x you
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girl your hanahaki au is absolutely wrecking my shit i--- I don't ever read ongoing fics and this is why. I just cannot wait?!? But the waiting somehow makes it better too?!? I'm literally dead bro I can't I love it so much
hahah omg thank you !! I’m really happy to hear you took a chance on this wip and that you like it so much!
not to get on my soapbox or anything but you have given me a great corner to shout from
as a disclaimer I totally understand why people will choose not to read wips and I truly think you know your mental health and what you can stand to wonder about/think about/obsess over/NEED to know a conclusion for better than anyone else
BUT as a writer who almost exclusively posts in wips, people reading them before they’re finished is my life blood and I am so grateful and it makes the writing process so much more fun for me because I know at least someone else is invested in my brainworm of a story?? someone else is enjoying it and thinking about it and I’m putting a small amount of good into the world??
the best analogy I’ve been able to come up with is like:
when you read a finished fic you’re eating a whole meal and that’s great that’s so amazing (especially if you tell the cook you liked it after you’re done). and you’re literally always welcome to eat that meal whenever you want. finished fics are like standing dinner invitations: I am always happy to have you and I mean that very genuinely
but if you read a wip, you’re keeping me company in the kitchen while I cook. and that’s sort of priceless. in some instances, you can even tell me the food needs more spice and I’ll think about it and listen!!! you’re sitting on my kitchen counter as I bustle around my space and we’re talking about what I’m doing and also how I’m feeling and maybe how you’re feeling and it just feels like community more than anything else I’ve experienced in any fandom. like you’re with me in my space as I’m creating food I hope you like. we’re both invested and it’s amazing
and I think in general that’s why wips are a lot of fun and also maybe why the waiting between chapters is fun for you - you’ve suggested that I add paprika to the pot and you’re waiting and wondering if I will, and I’m laughing and hoping you like the soup either way but also wondering if paprika will work with the recipe, and if I can add a bit to it just for you while staying true to the dish I envisioned at the get go.
#asks#(stepping off my soapbox) very sorry for that I didn’t know I cared so much#but the truth is I want everyone to read wips all the time and I DO get why people don’t#because a story that remains unfinished haunts you sometimes and people enjoy that on different scales#but wips are amazing#as an author with many#but also as an author with more completed stories than wips but who also is apparently#known for having wips which like make it make sense I guess whatever#wips are amazing because my#favorite part of stories is talking with you about them#I cut out answering ao3 comments a few years ago so I could focus on writing stories#but I always try to answer asks on tumblr#about a chapter before I post the next one#I love it it’s my conversation space where I feel most comfortable#comfortable *#and I’m so sorry#this ask answer has ballooned way past what your very kind ask warranted#I just have emotions about this lately#waiting can mAke it better I promise - you make a potato salad and you don’t immediately eat it. you put it in the fridge#so the flavors meld#sometimes fics are the same way tbh if you can experience them like#that.#sometimes you read a wip and you’re like wow that could be a motif and then you watch I#that motif develop over a year and you get this satisfaction of being right and also being proud of the writer??#idk I could be talknin#out of my ass but I just. love Wips. all the time and always
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the challengers fic about the 2019 us open that lives in my head and is 90% tennis is so good you guys trust me
#spoiler alert art loses to medvedev in the semifinals because i would never take a gs final away from my guy even in a silly little story 🥰#after the match he says to tashi are you gonna yell at me this time if i say he played really well#and she says only if you tell me you still want to retire at the end of the season. after a run like that#because he cares abt tennis again yayyyyy#patrick is there dw he is there#i don’t think i can read any challengers fic because i clicked on one the other day#abd the authors note was like ‘idk anything about tennis 😁’ and i was like not for me then 🙂↔️🙂↔️
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Hmmmm HHMMMMM got to a Moash chapter and I for one am excited for Inquisitor (??) Moash but starting to become more and more concerned that mr branderson thinks monarchies are better than democracy 🧐🧐
#wat shitposting#wat spoilers#wind and truth spoilers#listen... you can pry moash from my cold dead hands#also i am not the best at sussing out what is a sanderson character voice belief and what is an author insert belief#like sometimes he has a way of writing povs that are obviously not his bleeding through and sometimes he doesn't#i just don't know#i also don't know if i care its not like he's running for office or anything so idk if it matters#just makes me go 🧐🧐🧐🧐#monarchies are def better for fantasy stories because voting is kinda boring when you're doing it right lol i get it#much to think on#/thinks about moash instead/ wait who said that
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Okay now I’ve looked into the whole “Season 6B” thing and it’s extended history… my god. Russel T Davies really took literal decades of Extended Universe media and the closest thing to word of god you’ll probably ever get in the Doctor Who universe behind the shed and shot it stone cold dead huh.
#between this and the whole ‘I haven’t seen Susan since I left her in the future’ (glances at the events of to the death) thing#I am honestly kind of. angry?? at how little respect rtd seems to have for the extended universe#like. I understand that you cannot acknowledge and keep track of every single thing in the dw universe#while also writing satisfying stories for tv#it’s just impossible it can’t be done#however#there are some things that I feel if they are emotionally significant enough to a character or has been held to be collectively true#*have#for a very long time#and have been used as the basic premise for the work of many different writers and creators#as a creator myself#it just feels like insanely disrespectful to ignore all that? Y’know? Like to act like you’re the final authority on everything?#within a universe and continuity that has been forged with the fingerprints of thousands of people#idk. just feels like a dick move.#it’s probably also just because I’m a snobby eight fan but#I’m fine with the tv series ignoring / never referencing the edas or comics or whatever#just slap those bad boys in a parallel universe#but like. the audios? that’s like everything eight has other than a tv movie and a 10 minute special?#and you’re just going to say that one of the most devastating and significant things that happened to him. just. like.#didn’t occur??? hello???#I mean granted Moffat also kind of did this with the doctor’s wife in relation to the zagreus!tardis. but honestly.#I give everything pre-lucie miller a continuity slide anyway. shit got weird it was the wilderness years#I don’t care if they never acknowledge it.#anyway#this was about the second doctor? this was about the second doctor#the war games colourisation#the second doctor#season 6B#the war games
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Last night, I was thinking about the twins and was able to put my finger on what was still bugging me about them.
Despite it making us feel old, the 90s IS history (hell, yesterday is history!). AG is saying it, but I’m not sure they… mean it?
From the hints of the girls’ stories I’ve seen so far, the only anchoring historical event seems to be y2k. Everything else is nice enough, but certainly not unique to the 90s, and could be given to a goty instead.
Honestly? Y2K is not enough. It’s a little too safe. Yes, it was a big deal to the people who lived through it. However, it was literally just New Years, but cooler (and with a lot of programming work in the background to change years to be stored as four digits). What are the lasting effects that kids can recognize today? Because I see very few that can’t just be chalked up to the passage of time.
There was a lot more to the 90s than fashion, pop culture, and the biggest new years ever, but it kinda seems like those are the only parts AG is interested in portraying. When you put y2k up against some of the other historical events that other American Girls live through, even just the ones from the 20th century, it seems pretty silly. Second wave feminism, the Great Depression, the civil rights movement, and now….. new years but the number changes a bit more than usual!!!!!! Like. Cmon.
Even if they were wedded to portraying y2k, columbine, the effects of which are VERY much felt by kids today, happened that same year. But I kinda doubt AG will have the guts to even discuss it in the girl’s stories, which is really sad (and honestly one of the biggest downsides to more modern historical dolls - the history they’re covering is still too touchy for a lot of parents to be comfortable with).
Also, by pushing the girls to be in the late 90s, I’m betting AG is trying to worm their way out of having the 2000s girl live through 9/11 (i.e. watching it on tv) and the start of the war on terror. Which like. I get WHY (still too touchy for parents) but it’s really frustrating. 9/11 and it’s aftermath is arguably one of the most impactful events in American history, it’s stupid to dance around it. Felicity gets to live through the actual revolution but god forbid a more modern girl actually live through recent historical events.
#american girl#agblr#american girl dolls#isabel hoffman#nicki hoffman#the twins#my posts#my opinions#to be clear: I don’t actually care if the 2000s girl watches the towers fall live. but the stuff that comes immediately after NEEDS to be in#her story. or there would be no reason at all besides nostalgia to make a 2000s doll.#which is kinda the problem I have with the twins. it really seems like had no reason besides nostalgia to make them 90s dolls.#which is also reflected heavily in the author interviews which like :/#the literally just answer the question of ‘why does this story matter’ with ‘they’re twins and that’s neat :)’#ok so like….. nothing about actual 90s history outside of pop history remember fondly?#nothing about their lives as part of an interfaith family?????#girl what?????#(to be clear that is on ag - not the authors. those interviews were HIGHLY manicured. ag was telling the story they wanted there. idk what#the authors actually think about it)
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idk if this is bc of fuckass n52 shit but every fic i read where tim complains about his relationship with dick. to JASON. where tim reconciles with dick. because of JASON. where tim doesn't feel comfortable around dick. but he does around JASON. guys please....... guys........... are you so serious rn.............
#i think some people on ao3 just love the story of jason and don't actually know any story arc he had after utrh. except n52 panels.#like!! everyone's entitled to do what they want!! whatever!!#but come ON you cannot seriously write a serious fic and then be like the heads in the duffle bag thing is In the Past <3#but the robin changeover debacle that ended with tim declaring 'you'll always be there for me <3' is the real issue#it's not that i don't think tim and dick's relationship is without issues it's that involving JASON immediately makes me care less#no disrespect i'll just instantly assume the author doesn't actually care about tim and dick's relationship lol#that's dick's little brother that's tim's big brother they're so important to each other!! they were batman and robin together for a while!#jason and dick have been enemies more than they were ever brothers and i can think of three jason tim fratricide attempts off the dome#JASON is not anyone's buddy here#jason dressed up as nightwing and killed people........ tricked dick into thinking he killed tim in bftc........#dick is not gonna be like. his desperately sad and regretful older brother. and tim should not trust jay over dick!!!!#idk ik there's other comics people are basing their characterization on (sometimes) so like whatever#and i am by no means an expert like at all#i think i'm kind of just a jason hater. like he's easily the least interesting bat to me#in the context of the family at least!!!! his story is compelling i just don't care about him like mending fences or whatever#let him be toxic and shitty!!!! he has a tragic backstory and it did NOT make him good!!!!!#why is the serial killer in the batfam!!!!!#zero interest in discourse btw. just tired of ao3 lol
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starting a new charity to raise money to place published authors who are reylos into different fields of work for their own good and ours.
#to be clear idgaf about ao3 reylos. ship reylo for all i care. they're consenting adults blahblahblah whatever but its INCREDIBLE to me the#number of reylos who are drama magnets in the publishing world HOW and WHY does this keep happening.#i realize this is almost certainly a combination of factors: its a huge franchise its a popular ship so like by the numbers there have got#to be more reylos actively writing that ... idk. sherlock/watson or castiels or other more niche (by the juggernaut scale of SW) fandoms...#the reylo shoving the other reylos under the bus is like the piece de risistance of this story. i mean i feel bad for them being#framed as a racist hate mob review-bombing PoC authors. noone should be framed for something like that. but its still funny#that it's where her mind went when she decided on a scapegoat for her lies.#synnthposting
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i think it is silly when people act like studio ghibli is the end all be all of animated filmmaking and writing when in fact every film will have a different combo of writers and directors and when marnie was there is a movie that cannot execute the basic tenets of "show dont tell"
#DONT get me wrong its a good movie and a good story#but i would love if someone could explain to me Why they chose to do ALL the exposition as narrated flashbacks#also why did they have the audience put together who marnie was SOOOOO much earlier through flashbacks we assume anna as the pov character#is also having only for her to apparently not know who marnie was until the moment her mom hands her that photograph#i also dont get why everyone at the school would be like UGHHHH SHES SO QUIET like they SAID she used to be bright and happy and expressive#and it was only after she found out about the govt subsidy that she got upset and quiet. how long ago did she find out.#where are her friends. i'm curious about the book and how similar or different it is from the movie. i'm curious how much the author knew#about foster care in japan. also is anna in foster care or has she been adopted? i guess foster care if theyre getting subsidies.#a (children's) book BY a japanese foster parent called ぼくのかぞく has an afterword by the author (idr her name) about the foster system in japan#and just the afterword was a really interesting read. i am wondering how much the people (be they original author or screenplay adaptor)#who decided anna should be a foster child knew about foster care in japan. i dunno. again i liked it well enough#but something something interesting trend in most recent ghibli films about accepting a mother and again. if someone can explain to me why#there are so many narrates flashbacks explaining the story instead of.....idk.....anna investigating further.....her flipping through the#stages of marnie's life at the manor like a broken vhs#something like that#t
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also i think that after seeing that Something is going out with his eichisama tori should also sneak into town to go and see what's the deal with this wataru guy. and he inevitably gets lost but meets hajime and they have a bonding moment barbie movie-style and him and tomoya help tori meet wataru. and then wataru sees tomoya and goes "oho! interesting child!" which once again leads to eichi unreasonable jealousy against this poor random kid
Okay so I've been thinking on this and I've been trying to get something coherent and bear with me right right.
(this got so long again I just started going into detail and detail and detail and oh god I am so sorry)
So Tori, poor, innocent Tori, has to come to terms with the fact that Eichi is hiding something from him (that "Something" being a tall blue-haired extra of unknown origin) and he knows that, technically, the mature thing would be to leave it alone. Eichi will have his reasons for being a little secretive about it. He has his own life and if he doesn't want to be open about...whatever it is that seems to be going on there.... then he doesn't have to be because the man has a right to privacy.
Tori knows that. But Tori also knows that being mature doesn't matter if, technically, his beloved Eichi-sama could be at risk of giving his heart away to a scoundrel that only wishes to play with him until he's bored and then throws him away, breaking Eichis heart in the process. We couldn't have that! And what if he's a criminal? Can you really trust someone who snoops around on other peoples property without their knowing? No you can't! So really it's only natural Tori wants to know what that guys deal is. Out of a genuine concern for his friend. Of course.
And so obviously it's a completely acceptable and normal and rational decision when he sees that Yuzuru isn't there for a moment to keep watch over him like the guard dog that he is (really Tori isn't a child anymore there's no need to be so overprotective) and the other staff members also don't seem to be around and Eichi is also nowhere to be seen, that he decides to take his coat and pack his little bag with some money (read: more money than just "some" money) and tries to sneak out of the house and down the path across the small meadow and the bit of forest that separates their not-so-humble abode from the small town where the other people live.
His inital plan simple. Go there; ask around a little, maybe try some tailing (after hearing stories from the other aristocrats about how one is able to hire people to follow their spouses around without them noticing - and that apparently being an actual thing people earn their money with - he's decided that it can't be that hard and he should try his luck.) and then leaving as quickly as possible, lest Yuzuru die of a heart attack after finding out Tori dissappeared. It would be quick and easy and nobody would ever find out. That was the original plan. But Tori very soon comes to find that that could prove harder than he thought when he notices he actually really really enjoys the feeling of not having anyone hover over him like some sort of falcon watching their prey.
The little river running by the path through the meadow is still frozen (It is winter after all) and the snow on the ground almost reaches his ankles. The 15 minute walk takes him 30 because he keeps jumping around in the snow (He's made three snow angels by now. For a second he has to think of his sister and of how nice it would be if she were here with him too and how they could make snow angels together were it not for her having to stay with their parents, but he pushes that thought to the back of his head again and decides to move on with his way).
When he eventually arrives at the town - and after just wandering aimlessly through the rather empty streets - there are three major epiphanies.
The first one is that he doesn't have a clear destination. He has no idea where to look for the blue-haired weirdo. The second is that, seeing as it is a forenoon in january, most people probably aren't spending their time outside. And if they are then they are at a different place than where he is. And the third and final one: He is completely and utterly lost.
It should be regarded as an accomplishment really. Getting lost in a town with a population of barely 300 locals living there. Indeed Tori would think it impossible. Yet here he is. If anything he's sure he's at least the only one who can claim this feat for himself. This is fine. He has this under control. If he just keeps walking then he's sure to come out somewhere (No there are no tears in his eyes anyone who says otherwise is just imagining things (he decidedly ignores the little voice in his head that tells him "Who's gonna say otherwise. Look around yourself, have you forgotten that you're all alone here?")). So the big brave boy that he is he marches onward, ignoring the way his fingers have started to feel numb from the cold and his eyes have not stopped watering and the little voice in the back of his head that tells him he should've just listened to Yuzuru (He banishes that one to the deepest depths of his subconscious very quickly. There are blows that his pride can take in these situations and then there's having to agree with "You should've just listened to Yuzuru". If There is one thing that can be said about Tori then it's that he is not one to simply give up. He has come this far and he'll be damed if he backs out now).
Lost in thought and not paying much attention to his surroundings (he has more important things to think about right now), he only manages to register a flash of blue in his peripheral vision. And because this could be what he's come here for in the first place but more importantly because this is a person and that is where the bar is set, Tori immediately tries to follow them. If Lady Luck is especially nice to him this time she lets this person be the mysterious stranger he's been looking for, but what feels like a day of walking through empty streets in the biting cold of a noon in late january have humbled him enough to not push it with his luck.
And when he turns the corner, calling out for the figure to wait, insted of the strange man he was expecting he comes face-to-face with a meekish looking boy with blue hair and big violet eyes and next to him there's a second boy, this one able to be described in all aspects with only one word: average. And for a solid ten seconds they all just stare at each other.
Tori doesn't really know how, he really has no idea, but somehow he ended up following the two home. Or, well, more or less. Following isn't really the right word here. After their almost-staring-competition on the street the meekish looking one with the blue hair asked him if he was alright because "he seemed lost" (he absolutely did not.) which then prompted an entire series of events that ended is Tori sitting in this strangers families home - with an entirely different stranger also there - getting a serving of what he assumes to be radish soup. Tori feels a little sorry for the boy, Tomoya, as he said his name was, who seemed like he was previously engaged in a conversation with the other boy, who later introduced himself as Hajime and who had spent the entire way asking him questions about how he ended up here and what someone like him was doing all alone in a sleepy village neighbourhood like theirs and if he really didn't need a tissue (He hadn't cried while explaining how he was lost. He totally hadn't) and on and on and on as Tomoya had to awkwardly walk behind them.
So now, sitting at this table with these two people who he has only met today and who have given him a bowl of soup to warm himself up with, he has to tell everything about how he ended up in this situation in the first place. At the end of his recollection of this oh so wonderful day he is met with two pitying looks an a laugh - apparently one of Hajimes younger siblings had joined them at their little impromptu gathering (he wonders, distantly, how his own sister is doing right now).
And as he's about to say that he should probably make his way home and resume his mission another time when he has a map, Hajime mentions that he actually knows the guy Tori is talking about and that he lives at the local inn and that that isn't that far from them and that he and Tomoya can walk him there if he wants to. Tori agrees immediately. He is so over trying to be discreet about it at this point he really just wants some sort of success in this kind of ridiculous endeavour he's set out on.
So after the soup is finished and his limbs don't feel like they're about to fall off anymore the trio goes on their merry way and Tori feels a little silly because for all the walking around he did before they reach this inn really pretty quickly... maybe he should've thought to bring a map... The three of them venture further into the inn, and Tori only overhears Hajime talking to an older woman, but he's more occupied with looking around the place. It's father homely and rustic, a completely different atmosphere than at their place. There are noises from the few patrons sitting at the tables and chatting with each other, but it only add to the cozy feeling of the entire place.
When Hajime comes back he leads Tori up a little stairway and down a dimly lit hallway. They stop in front of a door at the very end of it (in my head there's a bit of a terasse thing happening there like. you can look down into the part where the tables are and such right right) and Tori barely has time to mentally prepare for the fact that this really is happening now before Hajime knocks and the sound of muffled steps approaching the door can be heard.
When the door finally opens (it's been a few seconds at best but it feels like an eternity), Tori is greeted by the lovely view of a pair of pale clavicles, barely covered by a black linen blouse. He has to actively look up to look at the face of their owner and when he is met with a pair of sharp, purple eyes he feels like his throat just sew itself shut. Hajime explains to Wataru that Tori was looking for him and suddenly a light seems to go up above Watarus head as a look of recognition flashes over his face and he turns around to Tori again and asks him if he's "the princess that Eichi's been telling him all about". Tori is confused. Hajime decides that this is his cue to leave and he slowly backs away to go back down and collect Tomoya, who's been roped into helping out with the catering by some elder gentleman (Wataru watches Hajime as he collects Tomoya and they leave, intrigued by this strangely average boy, as Tori just stares in horror as the realisation dawns upon him that he is now completely alone with this man whom he didn't even intend on speaking to in the first place).
So now he is here. In this very awkward situation. Sitting on a chair in this strangers room (for the second time today! Did he ever have a day this eventful? Who knows! Tori for sure doesn't.). He wants to talk, but Wataru is faster and asks him what he's doing here. Tori doesn't really know how to reply. How do you talk your way around having to tell someone that you actually got lost on the way to spy on them. That's right. You can't. Well, Eichi could. But Tori is Tori and he never wished for that to change more than he did now.
He looks out of the window and it is at that moment that another three major epiphanies reach him. Firstly that he doesn't know what to do now that he's here, secondly that he's going to get murdered by Yuzuru (and if worst comes to worst also Eichi) once he gets back because he's been gone all day without telling anyone and they're probably all worried sick, and last but not least: it is dark outside. He can't go home like that. He is virtually stuck in this predicament he found himself in.
Wataru seems to have a similar thought, because the immediate follow up question after not really getting a coherent answer from Tori is if anyone knows he's gone. Tori shakes his head. If Tsukasa ever finds out about this mess of a situation he will have to die because he would never let Tori live that down.
He gets ripped out of his incoming spiral by the bird that takes a seat on his head and Watarus over-the-top contemplative sigh and the slight lilt in his voice when he voices the next issue that's in the room. He isn't even speaking to Tori anymore, but to his bird that sits on Toris head, Jeanne, and Tori is starting to get annoyed by the way he jokes about this entire thing, calling Tori a "a little bird that escaped its nest", as if he isn't stuck having to prepare for his untimely demise. And by the way this guy hasn't put down his cryptic smile and teasing voice ever since he entered the room. When he thinks things can't get any more awkward for him Wataru proposes two options. Either he walks him home, or Tori has to stay at the inn for the night and he brings him back in the morning. Tori decides he'd rather go back home sooner than later (he'll have to take the lacture either way and he's probably caused everyone enough worries by now anyways. And also he misses his bed.). So Wataru grabs his coat, quickly goes to tell the inn-keepers he's "bringing retuening the princess to ger people" (Tori doesn't know if he liked the bird comparison better or not).
The way back is still very tense because Tori does not dare to walk next to Wataru (he's sketchy it's not Toris fault it's a normal reaction) and so he just awkwardly walks behind him, He doesn't really watch his surroundings - it is dark and the only nice thing is that it's snowing and there are animal sounds and they are spooky and he needs to watch the way and it's easier to think that way - until suddenly he gets hit by a snowball right in the head. And he is so baffled by this that he just stares at Wataru, and Wataru grins at him with his stupid stupid grin and somehow they end up in a snowball fight on this meadow where the only reason you can see anything is because of the snow and when they finally arrive at the mansion they both have so much snow in their hair and their clothes are wet from the melted snow and when they knock on the door and wait for someone to open Wataru gets some of the snow out of Toris hair and says that that snowball fight can be their little shared secret and Tori grins back at him and agrees and when the door opens and both of them are frantically ushered in by a maid that tells another one to get Yuzuru and Eichi Tori decides that maybe this guy isn'r so bad after all. Maybe he's actually quite nice.
#And then Yuzuru scolds both of them#but that's alright because Tori had a very adventurous day#Wataru stays over over the night again because Eichi doesn't let him leave in “this kind of weather” (it's a very mild little snowstorm)#the entire time I was just imagining the backside of that coin with Yuzruru and Eichi realising Tori is missing and all hell breaking loose#it's a little funny to me idk#this was very Tori centric no Eichi in this story just Tori and Hajime and a little bit of Tomoya and Wataru#and I you can tell I was less. yanno. here because I only got really self indulgent with that ending#ALSO IT IS THREE AM THIS IS MY FINAL MESSAGE TO THE WORLD GOOD NIGHT#And this got so unbelievably long I have been sitting here for HOURS#Never let me write scenarios ever again it will go way ouf of hand and by the end I will have forgotten how to english#and it will show#and I will accidentally write an actual fleshed out silly little scenatio instead of just a long post#also I think this is the longest as of yet how did I do this#do you know how hard it is to describle Hibiki Wataru without sounding like the gayest person on the planet?#this was easier when it was about Wataei and I could just wax poetically about him#I don't even care I'm just looking forward to going to sleep right now#this could've been better but I'm not a fanfic author for a reason#namely because I'm bad at it#bard/noble au
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Unpopular fandom opinion but: "If it's not in the movie/book/show itself then it isn't canon, idc what the creator says!" is such a stupid af bullshit take lmfao.
#like not everything can be condensed into the source material like you'd like it to#it's such a backwards and limiting way of looking at media too#isn't it much more fun to look at the additional information/extra stuff revealed about the world and characters that the writers have#oh so lovingly provided for you?#if the creators say something then it IS canon#yes ik that not everybody has access to social media to find out information that wasn't revealed in the show#but that doesn't mean it's not canon just because not everybody sees it#i see so many people say stupid shit like 'if the creator actually cared enough about this detail then they'd put it in the story! therefor#it's not canon!' and while yes sometimes that may be true#other times it's not included simply because the creator couldn't find a way to include it or--depending on the medium--there was no way to#include it#and this is not me talking about 'x would not fucking say that' instances or justifying bad writing being covered up by going on twitter#but when creators reveal additional details about the characters or the world then idk why you'd want to pretend it's not canon or isn't#official just because it's not in the story#another stupid thing i see people say is 'those are just the creators headcanons' which is the stupidest and most pretentious thing in the#world#headcanons refer to what you think about OTHER PEOPLE'S characters that are not your own#you wouldn't call art a creator made of their own character 'fanart' an author's thoughts on their own characters is not a 'headcanon'#that is just so naive entitled and disrespectful#and people say this about author's interviews and the likes but like...what's the point of getting those interviews if you're not going to#take them as canon?#they add to the worldbuilding#that's the fun! that's the spice! that's the appeal!#come on now you guys i'm tired#fandom#my post
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when will aup sidestories return from war and stop leaving me bitter about how the main story ended
#lumensis' characterization & death + the revelation of ludgers desire were extremely anticlimactic#700+ chapters of building up only to have the resolution forcefully/hastily crammed into. what. 2 and 1/2 chapters?#and am i supposed to care for his relationship with his mom when it didnt come up in 99% of the novel?#tbh it had *many* opportunities to come up but the author wanted to keep ludgers desire as mysterious as possible#and so it lost its chance to have any emotional buildup#well other than the implications of regrets which were frankly a bit oversaturated in the novel#(again. what happened to the 'show dont tell' principles)#honestly even occasional flashbacks to ludgers mom teaching him about all kinds of myths and lores when its relevant#would have helped in this aspect plus showcased his growth and development over time even when its off screen#(doesnt make his vast knowledge look like it conveniently came out of nowhere)#while also greatly enhancing the world building of his game breaking 'real magic'#anyway i think ludgers reconciliation w his mother would have been more impactful if ludgers past life came up more often#hell it would have done wonder in exploring his depth if we are going with framing his past lifestyle as a flaw#the thing about ludger as a character is that his past (in both worlds) is much more interesting than his present#bc its the only way we can see how he mentally changed in comparison as his changes are nearly non existent in the present timeline#(a part of the reasons why ludgercaseys relationship over time is an appealing topic is that it showcases both of their changes)#(reading about a protagonist who has no mental changes over the course of the story is no different than watching... a nature documentary)#im still v salty about how we never get to see arpas and bettys reconciliation btw#so do emotional closures between ludger and other characters#those are literally the meat of the story that would be worthy of their own arc#sayren why the hell did you rush through them and put them off screen#in the end instead of proving that he has finally learnt his lessons by confronting his emotions ludger chose to run away from it yet again#even if we are to assume that is whats gonna happen post epilogue why is his change accomplished by a goddamn last minute timeskip#(that is also lowkey a failed suicide attempt in disguise)#instead of what could have been... idk... a banger novel named aup#good christ#rant
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read the beginning of a popular book out of curiosity and something happened in the first few pages that made me realize it might be least For Me book ever written
#there's a list of characters at the beginning of the book and only 4 out of 28 were women#but one of the female characters on the list sounded slightly interesting to me so i was like 'i'll find out what her deal is'#she showed up at the very beginning and her entire appearance consisted of being murdered. no actions and no dialogue#she is not important to the plot and is never mentioned again (i searched the rest of the book for her name)#i have no idea why the author felt the need to include her in the dramatis personae#some of the men on the list are also dead before the story begins but those are like. the family members of major characters#it's almost worse that this character is on the list than it would be if she weren't. it's fine to have a background character who dies#and whose only narrative role is to die#but the fact that she was on the list of characters at the beginning made me expect SOMETHING from her#i just ended up feeling tricked idk skjdfhkjg#anyway it quickly became apparent that the author and i care about completely different things when it comes to stories and that's fine#but i don't think i've ever given up on a book so quickly in my life lmao#fandom musings
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waltzes in deltarune chapters 1 & 2
empty town
lantern
darkness falls (3/4 time. whether or not it’s truly a “waltz.” idk. lacks the typical accompaniment.)
the circus
a town called hometown
my castle town
berdly (also bluebird of misfortune)
faint courage (see darkness falls — maybe incorporates more of the accompaniment?)
acid tunnel of love
dialtone
man.ogg
#$ 420 non gaster lore hell#mostly for my own notes#possibly notable that my funky town is no longer a waltz. it’s. funk. lmao#idk. it feels like waltzes are significant to tfox#he seems to be careful about their inclusion#he seems to associate waltzes with intimacy in some way. I Think. like the archetypal Dance#if i can be a little auteur theory. notice how both toby.fangamer vids so far incorporate a ballroom dance as a form of bonding#between characters in those respective stories. TGLS specifically references waltzing#both secret bosses have a waltzing prelude to their battle themes#ralsei has several waltzes associated with his relationship to the player/kris#death sequences are arguably waltzy. and what could be more intimate than Those Screens#berdly is a pretentious nerd who masks for approval#idk. anyway.#* i guess by auteur theory i mean transtextual reading of things ‘directed’ by the same author and created concurrently. w/e… you get it
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what is worm?
Worm is a webserial by wildbow
It's about a bullied Teenage Girl who can Control Bugs and originally Sets Out to be a Superhero, but ends Up joining a Team of small time supervillains in Order to spy on them instead
#idk man#its very good but its also an amateur authors first work so it might be kinda rough around the edges in parts#also idk if this is something you care about but it is one of those stories that has pretty much every trigger warning under the sun#also its a million and a half words long
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